Vampire Journals
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IMDB rating: 5.40 Plot: A 19th century vampire stalks a more powerful vampire lord in his quest to gain revenge over the death of his mistress. In his search for the vampire lord in Eastern Europe he kills many of his servants and fellow vampires while cursing another to vampirism as well. |
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Actors: Gunn David,Dinvale Mihai,Condurache Dan,Niculescu Mihai,Morris Jonathon,Nitu Gelu,Sofron Cosmin,Horror,
My Novel need feed back?
hi I’m writing a novel about vampires i don’t know if its any good or not so i need feed back to see.
i have had lots of help from yahoo answers on my book so thank you yahoo and thank you readers. I dont want my book to get stolen so im only gonna tell chapter 1 hope you like it
Chapter 1
It was dark, almost midnight. Blood stained the carpet in the small house. The house usually gave off a happy, almost welcoming aura. Not tonight. A man’s yellow eyes were watching a woman’s body. A single twitch, then she rose from the floor. Her canine teeth grew, her skin paled, her eyes opened and transformed into the yellow glow of the other eyes.
" Tonight we feast." said the man. The two figures opened the door of the once-welcoming house and skulked into the night.
In a different house a young teenage boy woke up. He was sweating, pale-faced, his long blond hair wet.
"Nightmare, William?" His mother asked in the doorway.
" Mom, it was the vampires again."
"Try to get some sleep, you have to get up early. It’s Monday tomorrow. Good night."
"Night, mom."
William didn’t listen to his mom. He waited until she was out of the room, then got out of bed and walked across the stained blue carpet and over to his desk. He pulled out a small leather journal and started writing about his dream.
There was a man; he walked over to me and bit me. Then i was on the floor, dead. My veins started to bulge, my eyes opened. One was blood red and the other was yellow. My skin was ghostly white. I felt my lip being cut by giant fangs. The man helped me up. He stepped into the moonlight peering into the window. For the first time i saw his face. It was a sickly blue and white. He had jet black hair, and a drop of blood slid down his lip.
William Closed his journal and slipped back into bed. He went softly to sleep with the dim light of the moon peering through the window.
Add more drama and thrills to it, make it jump right out at the reader, so they will not lose interest.
Willow Moon | Feb 01, 2010
Its a tad boring. And the vampire thing is so over used. But keep writing. U can please everybody. For one person who hates it there is probably two that think its dull two who think its okay and one that thinks its great. I am one of the two that thinks its dull. Sorry.
Please answer mine http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index; _ylt=Ak65PeEn3K3rALPMeHSW7N3sy6IX;_ylv=3 ?qid=20100201154545AAlZ1i4
Country Wisdom | Feb 01, 2010
You’re doing too much telling, not enough showing.
Telling:
It was dark, almost midnight. Blood stained the carpet in the small house. The house usually gave off a happy, almost welcoming aura. Not tonight. A man’s yellow eyes were watching a woman’s body
Showing:
The moonlight filtered in through the windowpane, casting an eerie glow over the blood soaked carpeting. A clock downstairs stroked twelve just as he was leaving. He took one last glance at the body, cold and still on the stairs.
I’m not sure that this is something you can teach. I think you should take the time to really describe things. Instead of thinking of it as explaining a story to someone, think of it as you ARE someone in the story. Describe what you smell, the feeling of whats going on around you. There are plenty of good websites that would probably help you understand the difference between showing and telling. Just google it.
All of that being said, I do enjoy your style of writing. Its plain, but I’d rather take a plain story that I could understand than something that has way too much detail. You just gotta find a good balance. Being very matter of fact about things can help you in a horror story, and I’m a big fan of horror, but even those types of stories need some deeper description.
As far as plot goes, I don’t like dream sequences. I love vampires, but not the stephanie meyer vampires. Both dream sequences and vampires are overdone though, just be aware of that.
I love the words you use when you describe the vampires- his face was "a sickly blue and white," that tells me that we aren’t talking vegetarian vampires here… gives me some hope lol.
Good luck.
these weird and twisted nights | Feb 01, 2010
Star Kid
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IMDB rating: 5.20 Plot: Shy seventh-grader Spencer Griffith’s life changes when the meteor falls into local junkyard and he finds a Cybersuit - the wise and strong robot from another galaxy. Spencer puts Cybersuit on and becomes a different kind of guy. |
Actors: Mazzello Joseph,Gilliland Richard,Daniels Alex,Simmrin Joey,Simpson Brian,McGee Jack,Burghardt Arthur,Masterson Danny,Kronenberg Fred,Adventure,Sci-Fi,Family,
application answers originality problem?
I’m generally imaginative and original, but I’m having a brain fart. It sounds bad, but I need some answers for a counselor application for the summer. The camp feels like home to me, I love the people, but I just had to change counties, which sucks. It’s an outdoors camp, and the counselors are mostly around my age, 16-18. The kid are from about 7-13. It means a lot to me, but my mom just passed away and there’s a whole bunch of shit going down and it almost feels like I have nothing to offer. If you’re not going to answer the question, please don’t post anything. But I need help with two things, one is two qualities about myself that you I provide to benefit the campers, the other counselors, and to camp as a whole. The second is what I would like to learn at counselor training? Please provide at least 2 goals. Yeah, I know I shouldn’t ask strangers, but I have no one else to help me. Just offer some suggestions if you will, general ones that could apply to anyone really. I’ll star you if they work. Again, if you’re not going to answer the question, please don’t post anything. Thanks, Kate.
Hercules
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IMDB rating: 6.50 Plot: After Zeus fights and sends the Titans to the underworld, he becomes the ruler of Mount Olympus, home of all greek gods. Hades is sent to rule the underworld, but he makes plans to throw Zeus out of Mount Olympus with the Titans’ help. The three Fates warn him that his plans would be endangered if Hercules, Zeus newborn child, is still around by the time he tries to take over Mount Olympus. Hades sends Pain and Panic to turn Hercules into a mortal and kill him, but they fail in their attempt and leave him on earth with his divine strength to be raised as a human. Hercules grows up but later learns he is the son of gods, and in order to return to Mt. Olympus he must turn into a “true hero”. He is trained by Phil the satyr and becomes the most famous hero in ancient Greece after battling monsters of all kinds. He even saves Mt. Olympus from Hade’s take-over, but he only becomes a god again after he offers to exchange his life in order to save Meg, his love, from Hades’ underworld and shows that a true hero must have a strong heart and not only physical strength. |
Actors: Woods James,Heston Charlton,DeVito Danny,Donovan Tate,Keaton Josh,Bart Roger,Goldthwait Bob,Frewer Matt,Torn Rip,Holbrook Hal,Shaffer Paul,Animation,Family,Comedy,Musical,Adventure,
How can you officially beat Hercules in KingdomHearts?
Okay, i beat him. He has NO MORE bars left, but he keeps attacking me!! I attacked him to see what would happen, and he’s still unbeaten! I looked for an answer on the internet, but I have not found an answer to this problem in particular. They just say to attack him until his bars are gone! Please, if you know what to do, please tell me as soon as possible!
Amistad
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IMDB rating: 7.00 Plot: AMISTAD is about a 1839 mutiny onboard a slave ship that is traveling towards the Northeast Coast of America. Much of the story involves a court-room drama about the slave who led the revolt. |
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Actors: Freeman Morgan,Hawthorne Nigel,Hopkins Anthony,Hounsou Djimon,McConaughey Matthew,Paymer David,Postlethwaite Pete,Skarsgard Stellan,Adoti Razaaq,Fofanah Abu Bakaar,Milian Tomas,Ejiofor Chiwetel,Ashong Derrick N.,Silva Geno,Drama,History,Mystery,
"Amistad" Movie Questions!!!?
Please answer the following Q’s… At least 3 sentences.
1) What were the charges that were brought up against the Africans?
2) Why did John Q. Adams decide to argue the case before the United States Supreme Court?
3) What role did the President of the United States play in the case?
4) Was the character portrayed by Morgan Freeman; historical?
5) Why were the Africans portrayed as caricatures?
Thanks a lot…
Never mind, I just need answers to 6, 9, and 10…
1- Dey r blacks
2. Cos it is in human
2. To keep them as labours
Salam Pradeep | Oct 21, 2009
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